Author: laurenviolin
The characters of the story was borrowed from the movie "just my luck". The story is completely from the movie. It is a new story about the band Mcfly and a girl Lauren. It leads the reader directly into the story. At the beginning, the girl named Lauren frowns and a mysterious 'him' occupies the mind of Lauren. Just a few lines, we can guess this must be a teenager story,. The words used by the author to describe 'him' (such as ocean blue eyes, see breezing hair) colour the story with a dreaming feeling. We can image how the two lovebirds are flying in a night sky on the sea. I like this way of introducing the characters of the story.
Author: raven-fanboy
This is love story adapted from more than just friends? I like this story adaptive version because the author creates an interesting story using life style oral language. Through the conversation between the characters, the writer presents the Raven's feelings about the beast boy. This is a fast way for people to create a simple story without putting too much efforts on structure and words selection. While telling a story, we just chose the most interested part and speak out with simple words. This way of creating a story actually gives the readers freedom to use their imaginations. They can image how the characters look like while they are talking with each other.
Author: dmcintoshtx
Summary: Ennis tries to cope with losing Jack
This story is borrowed from the movie ,Brokeback Mountain. It is created as a slash of the whole movie story. It is written by the writer in a prose style. The theme of the story- "Jack, How do I live without you?- has been repeated in the article several times. I think repeating the theme sentence actually help the writer create a strong feeling in readers, especially in a short creative writing. This theme sentence create a sad or mournful tune. The sensitive readers can be attracted by this feeling very quickly from the beginning. Creating a touching tune for the article is very important.
#4 I Never Knew
Author: PadmeSkywalker540
This poem is adapted from the story of The Notebook. At the beginning, the sentence "I never knew" directly lead the readers to the internal world of the writer. Different feelings such as regret, sweetness, fear and other unspoken feelings are mixing together into this sentence. I am impressed by the writer's word expression skills. Simple but moving words can always resonate among readers. The writer, acted as the character of the story, asked and answered by oneself. I believe that readers can only be moved by the true feelings. The writer expressed his or her true feelings for love.
#5 Belonging
Author: Rosa Cotton
This story is well-written in terms of imagination. It is not written in a complicated structure. The story is developing along with the imagination journey of the character in the wood. The writer stimulates the readers to imagine different adventures in the wood. A good story not only stimulates reader's interests but also evokes their imaginative potentials to develop their own stories. The story tells me that plot creation should start by providing readers a situation filled with appeals and fantasy.
These are a little short, maybe a little bit more information would be good as well. also some pictures would be great just to give us more information.
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